Wednesday 11 April 2007

In the Seventh Heaven: Manchester Utd.

FANTASTIC!

Yesterday I saw the game of the Manchester United against Roma, who came with a certain advantage in the global score 2 - 1 from Rome, but now that the game was going to be in the Old Trafford it all seems that the game was going to be closed, with the Roma playing in the defence waiting for a chance to strike and score a goal that gave them an advantage... but the history was another.
Since the first minute, all the players of Manchester went to the front, trying to score since the first minute in order to have the control of the game... and they did it! With a magnificant play of Cristiano Ronaldo, Garrick got the ball a little bit outside of the area and made a perfect shoot, leaving with out chance to the Roma's goalkeeper and decret the 1 - 0.
After that, the second goal was even better, with the motivation in their side, the players of Manchester start to play more relax and with 5 consecutive passes between the team, they reach to the Rome's field and score a beautiful goal, after 1 or 2 minutes, Rooney scores the 3 - 0 and after that, all seems lost for Roma.
The final score of the match was 7 - 1, it was the best match of the Manchester United in the Champions League ever, and the score will be in the memory of all the fans that went to the stadium, and for all those fan that stayed outside (like me) to support the team in the TV.
Excellent game for United... time to make some changes in Roma.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Yesterday I saw the game of Manchester United against Roma, who came with a certain advantage with the score at 2 - 1 from Rome, but now that the game was going to be in the Old Trafford it all seemed that the game was going to be closed, with the Roma playing defensively, waiting for a chance to strike and score a goal that would give them an advantage... but the history was another. From the first minute, all the Manchester Utd players went to the front, trying to score in order to have control of the game... and they did it! With a magnificant play by Cristiano Ronaldo, Carrick got the ball a little bit outside of the area and hit a perfect shot, leaving Roma's goalkeeper with no chance and ?decret? the 1 - 0. After that, the second goal was even better, with the motivation on their side, the players of Manchester started to play in a more relaxed way and with 5 consecutive passes between the team, they reached Roma's penalty area and scored a beautiful goal, after 1 or 2 minutes, Rooney scores the 3rd - 0 and after that, all seems lost for Roma. The final score of the match was 7 - 1, it was the best Manchester United match in the Champions League ever, and the score will be in the memory of all the fans that went to the stadium, and for all those fans that stayed outside (like me) to support the team on the TV. Excellent game for United... time to make some changes in Roma.

Check my corrected version against your own, main mistakes are agreement of tenses within sentences and prepositions. Some of the things I have corrected are just connected to word order and natural phrasing as well...

Amir Hossein Nikzad said...

yes yes yes
it was fantastic
We will be champion...

and a question:
where are you? i didn't see you in recent days...
Good luck Luis